Describe who is impacted
In your petition body, describe how people are concretely affected by the problem. If relevant, use a personal story. Characters drive the story forward through their actions, and we have empathy when they are actively seeking solutions.
Video example: The characters in the video are Jordan and his mother Laura.
Goals and obstacles
Make it clear what your characters want for the future and the obstacles that stand in their way. We are interested in characters who strive to achieve something even though it is difficult for them.
Video Example: Jordan’s goal is to be a firefighter. The obstacle is the FDA blocking Right to Try legislation.
Stakes
Explain what it will mean if things change or stay the same. What do we hope for in the story and what do we fear? The higher and more concrete the stakes, the more compelling the story, so make it clear what happens if you win and what happens if you lose.
Video Example: If Laura loses, Jordan’s life may be shorter and thousands of patients could miss out treatments. If she wins Jordan’s life could be better and thousands of patients would get treatments.
Explain why now it the time to act
Summarize and stress the importance of immediate action. Connect your call to action with the stakes for those in your personal story, and the community at large. If there is an upcoming vote, deadline or meeting, include those details and encourage supporters to join you in mobilizing in other ways in addition to signing your petition. That might include contacting lawmakers, writing letters, participating in peaceful protests, or funding grassroots organizers.